Kiara {done}

[zaiden]

KIARA

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the basics
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name - Kiara

gender - Female

age - 4

species - lion

homeland - Pridelands

rank - Princess

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quick description - Kiara is a small slender well built bodied lioness. She has dazaling brown eyes, and a pink nose. Her body is a golden sun color.

full description - Kiara is a small slender well built bodied lioness. She has dazaling brown eyes with a hint of red, and a pink nose. Her body is a golden sun color, and her belly is a white. Her muzzle and chest are also white, and the tip of her tail is a dark brown color. Kiara is a small lioness, but she has sharp black claws on her feet. Her legs are well built from running, and hunting. Her ears are usually perked up, or put behind her to lisen. Kiara is a very beautiful lioness, and a very well built, strong one to. She lookes like her mother Nala, with the eyes and spirit of her father, Simba. Being so small is a advantage, this makes her run more fast, and get her prey a little quicker. But a few disadvantages are that due to her smallness, she is unable to take a full grow antallope down.


personality - Very spontanous, Kiara does not like to be bored. She loves to look up at the stars with Kovu, and use to look to the stars with her father. Kiara likes to run, and loves to hunt. She also loves to wrestle, and just have fun. But she is carefull, she is very protective of her family, and she would give her life to save others, to save her pride. Making her a good queen to be. In a lot of ways Kiara is just like her father Simba.
Kiara is a very fun lioness. She is adventerous, and always tries to find something to do. She is also a bit of a day dreamer. Always thinking about diffrent things, about life, and about her family. Though Kiara seems like a little good girl, she is really spoilled. Her parents were pretective, but gave her a lot. When she doesnt get her way she wont hesitate to through a temper tauntrum. She also doesnt like to do what her father wants her to do. She tends to dissobey him.

history - Kiara grew up on Priderock. Daughter to Nala, her caring mother, and Simba her over protective father. Kiara loves playing around, and wrestiling, always rough housing with the other lions. Kiara has met the love of her life, Kovu, a lion from the outlands. Not giving her love up, she made her father accept him. But what really got him to accept Kovu was when Kovu saved Kiara's life from a fire. Now Kiara and Kovu are together, and love eachother. Just like Simba and Nala do. But it is still a struggle living all together. Kovu and Kiara were going to run off, but a strong sence of duty to her pride kept them there. So now they are going through it together.

But before that, her mother and father had a hard time. Nala had got pregnate really soon, to when they had lost their first born son. Their only son, and they did not know how to feel about having Kiara. Kiara never knew her brother, due to him dissapering, at a early age.

After Nala and Simba had Kiara, and as she was growing Kiara never really liked how her parents were so protective. So Kiara often disobeyed her father, and went off close to the outlands, searching for a adventure. Soon enough, she found Kovu, and fell in love. Mabey she fell in love because of his personality, but mabey she fell in love with him because she knew her father wouldnt approve. Later, after they were torn apart, they found eachother again. Though this time Kovu was suppose to kill Simba, and when Kiara found this out, she started to disslike him, think baddly of him. But she just couldnt not love him.

After Kovu, and Kiara saved the two prides, and reminded them that 'we are one' Kovu was accepted into the pride, and Kiara started to love him even more. She continues to love him more and more everyday. When he kisses her, it is like the first, and know they are thinking about having little ones of their own. Though, Kiara doesnt want to be like her father, and wants her kids to be able to go off and see the world. Even though this world is diffrent from her cub years world. Kiara promises herself that she wont be over protective.

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what about yourself
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who are you - Zaidai, Kulay or Zai or Zaiden

roleplay example - Paws dangling, laying on the rock, head down, ears up, Pyro was just getting comfortable when his stomach growled. Pyro hadn't eaten since this morning, and he was hungry. He ate every five or six hours, and considering his massive body, that was pretty good. As Pyro got up, he saw lighting, and heard the thunder. " Great, now the deer and other animals are going to be spooked. I might have to settle for a rabbit." Pyro said, grunting. If there was one thing he hated the most for food, it was small game. They might be harder to catch, but Pyro hated the taste of them.

As Pyro got up, he took one more look out over the meadow, and lake, and the other packs land. Rain hitting his back as he walked down the steep rock dirt path. The rain started to get heavier as he started to get to the bottom. He knew that climbing rocks was dangerous in the rain, but he loved danger. As Pyro reached the bottom, he hoped down. Massive brown paws hitting the mud, leaving paw prints in the mud. Pyro looked down, his golden brown paws were now dark brown like his mask. Pyro let out a tisk tisk sound. He looked up from his paws, looking into the sky. It was a beautiful color. Mixes of black and Gray. To Pyro thunder clouds colors were pretty, and it made him happy to see them every time.

Pyro made his way over to the base of the cliffs. There was usually stupid little game here, and Pyro did not have time to walk over to the hunting trail where the big game usually are. Pyro's head went side to side, trying to find a rabbit. His eye caught movement in the bushes. Laughing, Pyro walked over to the bush and watched the movement for a little while. By the time a minuet had gone by Pyro knew where the movement would move. Sticking his paw on it, he put his claw into it. 'Not the most exciting hunt in the world. But at least I have food.' Pyro thought. Lifting his paw out of the bush, and sticking the dead rabbit into his mouth.

Pyro laid down in the nearby grass. Paws muddy, and now bloody clawed the rabbit for a few seconds before taking a bit out of it. Warm blood flowed into his mouth. Pyro took another bit, feeling it fill him up. By the time the rabbit was gone, and inside Pyro, he was a mess. Pyro started to clean himself off when lighting struck close by, and scared him to death. Pyro looked up, and saw the tree that had gotten struck by 10,000 volts of electricity. It was only a few hundred feet away from where he lay. Thankfully the tree was wet, so it did not catch fire. But it had deep groves where the lighting hit. Tree bark was on the ground, burned. Charcoal black, Pyro's smile snuck back onto his face.

[AdminAccount]

Hey Kulay, and welcome to the Dawning of a New Era!

There are a couple of things that I'd like you to change before I can accept Kiara.

1) Kiara should be 4 years old, not three.

2) Your physical description of Kiara is a little short, I'd love if you could expand on it a bit.

3) Your description of Kiara's personality is also a little short. I'd more so focus on the fact that Kiara is a little spoiled and is prone to disobeying her father and throwing temper tantrums. Currently, Kiara has no personality flaws.

4) I like how brief you've been on retelling what happened in the movie, but I would love if you could tell of events or an event that did not happen in the movie but has made Kiara who she is today. Perhaps you could look at how Simba and Nala reacted when the found out that they were going to be having another child, so soon after they lost Kopa, something that took place in the huge stretch of time that is skipped in the movie, when the duo go from cubhood to adulthood, or something that took place after the movie ended.

I know that this may look like a lot, but I tend to ramble. If you could fix up these things, I'd be more than happy to add Kiara to the accepted board.

[zaiden]

Edit it, I hope it is ok...

[AdminAccount]

Approved.