Kovu .:Done!:.

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KOVU

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the basics
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name - Kovu ("Scar" Swahili)

gender - Male

age - 4 years old

species - Lion

homeland - PrideLands

rank - Heir Apparent's Consort

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quick description -
Kovu is a darkish brown lion with green eyes and a dark
mane.

full description -
Kovu's pelt is darkish brown.His underpelt is lighter than his pelt and his eyes are green.Around his eye's are a darker brown than his pelt.His inner ear is dark brown and so is his mane and tail.
He has a outsider textured nose which is pitch black.He also has like a forward bit at the front of his head,hard to describe that bit, istead of a Simba texture mane.He has some dark brown mane/tufty bit on his front legs on his elbow,well i think it's called an elbow.

He has a scar on his left eye which is a light pinkish colour.
His green eyes are like emeralds.Kovu was more lighter when he was a cub.And is much darker now as an adult.His mane is lush and soft not rough and hard.Kovu has textures like an outsider,His mane is outsider texture and his nose is too.He also has a muscular build.

personality -
{Brave}
Kovu is brave and strong enough to defend for his self and the lions most important to him, like Kiara and the others.
Despite the time he first met Simba, as a cub, Kovu is very brave be he has out sider blood that runs through him and probably will continue running through his family.If Kovu is brave, maybe like an out sider, his family might be brave as well.Kovu probably would be able to take a challenge from Simba.

{Kind In The Inside}
Since he ever became an pride lander Kovu has been nicer than ever before.When he was a cub and had to be mean because his mum, Zira, wouldn't let him be nice.Because she wanted revenge on Simba, she made every out sider including Kovu be mean just because Simba killed Scar.Ever since Kovu was born he was kind in the inside, but because of Zira's anger because of Simba, Kovu couldn't have an experience on being kind.

{Mysterious}
Kovu is very hard to figure out. No one could ever tell what he was thinking because he always keeps a straight face.
Also no one could tell if he was sad or happy always a straight face.If Kovu was really depressed he would just have a sad face or if he was really happy Kovu would just be smiling. If Kovu was feeling angry he would go some where quiet, calm and private to calm himself down.


history -
Kovu was born in the outlands. He lived with his mum Zira, his siblings Vitani and Nuka and the rest of the pride. Not knowing who his father was, but knowing Scar wasn't really his father, Kovu just lived with part of his family, Nuka was Scar's son but Vitani was really someone else's daughter not Zira's or Scar's.
Kovu and his sister Vitani used to fight alot when they were cubs, well playing but they were outsiders.

Kovu loved the crocodile swamp so he went there everyday, as a cub, while he wasn't round any out siders he would be happy and just play around at the swamp.He knew if there was an out sider watching him, he would be aggressive so he won't get in trouble for being nice.Kovu thought it was unfair to never be happy and always aggressive.

Kovu was lieing by the crocodile swamp, he was lieing there minding his own buisness then Kiara came along.She disturbed Kovu, he growled and started asking questions.Kovu said to Kiara that "An outsider can do what ever they want", something like that.Kovu and Kiara ran to try get to the top of the cliff, because they disturbed the crocodiles.Kovu landed in the water and Kiara saved him from being eaten by jumping on it's jaw.
They escaped and Kovu started playing with Kiara.

Kovu loved playing with Kiara, and they played as long as they could, until his mum comes along and discovers what he is doing.
He knew he wasn't supposed to play with pride landers, but he disobeyed his mum and Scar, because he didn't really care because he knew Scar wasn't his real father.

Simba and Zira came and took Kiara and Kovu home.They said "bye" quietly. Kovu was in trouble. But all of a sudden Zira got abit nice. He heard her said that if Kovu becomes friends with Kiara he would be able to get to Simba.

Kovu continued to visit the crocodile swamp. Sometimes Kovu used to try and visit Kiara, but didn't succeed in that because the pride landers spotted him and chased him off.He was sad because he didn't actually play with anyone, just fight with Vitani.

Years past for Kovu as he did his usaul thing, fighting with Vitani and playing around near the swamp, when he was a cub.
Kovu is now an adult and had training from Zira. He was trained to kill Simba. Kovu was sent to rescue Kiara from the fire and went with Simba back to pride rock.
He lied there waiting for the morning. Kiara came to him and Kovu agreed to give her some hunting skills.

Kovu had a nightmare, his nightmare was about that he would turn on everyone and then become Scar, it may not seem scary to a few lions but it was to Kovu.Kovu knew he didn't like Scar and also didn't want to turn out to be him.All he knew about Scar what Zira told him, is that he was nice and Simba killed Scar.

The next morning Kovu was about to kill Simba when Kiara showed up. Kovu trained Kiara as best as he could.They ran to find Timon and Pumbaa searching for grubs. They roared to help them scare off the birds because they were stealing the bugs.

Kovu was smiling that Kiara taught him how to roar, he found it strange that a girl taught him something that should come in it's own time.Kovu remembered what something in his mind told him,
"Your roar will come when you most need it"
He also found that strange too.

Mintues later they were being chased by some rhinos but made an escape. They headed back to pride rock. Simba and Kovu were talking and were taking a stroll to the burnt plains.Simba told him what really happened to Scar, that he was a killer.

Kovu got the real story of Scar from Simba, because some how he knew that Simba was there, living the life of Scar's reign.
He was now happy he knew the real story of Scar.

The outsider's came and started to try and attemp to kill Simba once and for all. Simba ran and try to climb up the logs and Kovu tried to help Simba escape. Kovu watched Nuka climbing to get Simba but was killed, squashed, by logs. Kovu was really upset that Nuka was killed. Zira scared Kovu and gave him a scar on his left eye.

Kovu was mad and ran away.Before he had to go back to find Simba and say sorry because it wasn't his fault, he went to lie down in a cave and calm down.He thought Simba would never forgive him.

Kovu ran to find Simba. Simba banned, exiled, Kovu from the pride lands.He ran as he was pecked and was hurt by the other animals. He saw a reflection in the water, which looked like Scar.
Kovu became a rouge because he didn't want to go back.

He ran back to the cave he was in earlier, to calm down again.
Kovu was sitting by the river.Looking at his reflection in the water.
He only could see apart of him, the other part wasn't there.

Kovu was sad and alone. He was looking in the distance.
Kovu saw Kiara, he was so excited to see her.
He asked if she would like to start a pride together, but Kiara said they had to go back.

Kovu was happy he got to see Kiara again.They started running as the rain came down.It was heavy on them so they weren't going to fast.

Kovu was running with Kiara to the battle field. They made it just in time to stop Simba and Zira from fighting. Not long after, after the talking, Kiara and Zira fell and Kovu and the were worried.
Kiara landed on the edge but Zira hung on the ledge.
Kovu saw Kiara trying to help but Zira fell and drowned.

He was happy that evil had gone.Then he got a second thought, that there is evil not to far away.Kovu knew he would have a happier life now that he and the other out siders joined alliance with the pride landers.

Kovu was glad to see she was ok.
Kiara was helped up and Kovu nuzzled her.
After the talking Simba said that the out landers were welcomed into the pride and Kovu could be Kiara's mate.

Kovu, Kiara, Simba and Nala led the pride, at the front of course.
They were all happy to be together as one.Everyone lived as one and everywhere was a peace, just for a bit anyway.

They were standing side by side Simba and Nala then Kovu and Kiara all stood on the top of pride rock. They and the pride roared,
to the out siders it seemed to be a welcome into the pride.
Kovu lived with Kiara and the others in the Pride Lands.

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what about yourself
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who are you - kovu

roleplay example -
Sitting on pride rock a out sider lion was looking over the distance. He watched the beautiful sunset, it was an orange type colour and spread around the savannah, and smiled as the day ended. His mane lush and soft, blowing in the wind. He looked back to see Kiara walking up to him.
Kovu said in a soft voice,
"Beautiful Sunset isn't it?"
He smiled at Kiara then turned his head to the sunset.
Kovu thought "I wish I could have watched the Sunset with my family".
He was proud he could finally see it for the first time ever because he heard everyone talking about how beautiful the sunset was.

[AdminAccount]

Hi there, that picture of Kovu is adorable.

I have a few problems with Kovu's bio at the moment and I'd like to ask you to please fix them before your application for Kovu can be accepted.

Just a note about Kovu's rank, he would be just classified as 'Adult' or as the 'Heir Apparent's Consort' if you feel like getting fancy.

Now, onto the rest of the application. There are numerous spelling and grammatical errors in addition to strange word arrangements throughout the bio which make it a slightly difficult to read.

If you'd like assistance with your Kovu application, you can check out [this thread] or send a personal message to someone on the staff team, after all, we're here to help.

I think you could rework his personality a bit, since some of the things you have said to describe his personality contradict other things you've said about him or contradict his canon.

He can make friends quite easily,but afraid of angered pridelanders(such as trembling madly when he first saw Simba).Kovu is brave and not afraid of a fight,talking about because he is now older.

Kovu was only afraid of Simba as a cub because he was no match for the older lion. However, as an adult, Kovu was not afraid to challenge Simba, and stood his ground on numerous occasions when Simba was angry with him.

Personally, I would be more inclined to describe Kovu as smug and actually quite impressionable, seeing as how he spent all of his life being told one thing by his mother, and then he goes to live with the Pridelanders and suddenly he has a whole new outlook. You could go a bit more in depth about how Kovu acts, rather than listing off personality traits that Kovu may or may not exhibit.

The second problem with his bio is his history. We know what happened to Kovu in the movie, what we want to know is what else has happened to him throughout his life that wasn't in the movie. Perhapss explaining Kovu's mysterious parentage, and how he came to live with the Outlanders. Make him your own character by giving him a custom history. If anything happened to Kovu at times that weren't on the screen, like anything interesting that happened between the time when he first met Kiara until the time when he rescued her from the fire.

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Ok Is this Better?

[AdminAccount]

There is a definite improvement in your application.

I don't really see any change in his history. We don't really need to know every detail about Kovu meeting Kiara and what his mother said about it. Like I said before, maybe making up a history of the circumstances surrounding Kovu's birth and parentage would give his character a whole new dimension.

I would really love for you to go beyond the movie in Kovu's history. We don't know how Kovu came to live with the Outlanders, so instead of giving a synopsis of the second Lion King Movie, you should instead explain that, and leave movie details to a bare minimum.

You could cut out a majority of Kovu's history with Kiara and replace it with a very general synopsis. Instead of explaining the dialogue in the scene when Kovu and Kiara first met, perhaps only explaining that “a cub from the Pridelands had wandered into the Outlands and the friendship that the two cubs created on that fateful day would change both of their lives' forever”.

Also, you could get rid of all the details about Kovu's time in the Pridelands and instead write something along the lines of “Kovu's time in the Pridelands taught him the love that he had never experienced during his life with Zira, which he found in Kiara. After gaining Simba's trust, Kovu accidentally fulfilled Zira's plot which resulted in his exile. Kiara was devastated by this and ran away, and after reuniting with Kovu, she reminded him of their responsibility to their prides. The young couple managed to stop the battle between their prides, but Zira could not let go of her hate and drowned when the gorge flooded”.

Make the rest of it your own. You'll have more fun with Kovu if you make him your own by making up the parts of his life that weren't on the screen. We already know what happened in the movie, and I'd love if you could tell us what has happened to Kovu off the big screen.