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Ajizi
Jul 16, 2011 11:24:55 GMT -5
Post by naji on Jul 16, 2011 11:24:55 GMT -5
 “ All I want is quiet”
AJIZI
Nicknames: None at the moment, though I am sure Chafe will think up some in time CD
Gender: Male
Age: Toddler (6 months)
Species: Lion
Homeland: Badlands
Rank: Prince
Quick Description: Smaller than his brother, has blue eyes and will eventually grow a light Blondie mane
Full Description: As a cub Ajizi possess a brownish pelt with cerulean blue eyes and a thin and wispy tuft of chocolate brown hair upon his head. When he's grown up his body changes into a small to medium build, compared to his older brother Chafe, he's a little bit on the smallish side, his chocolate brown hair tuft lightened significantly into a honey colored yellow mane that isn't as scraggly as Chafua's but it is a little bit neater though.
Personality: Unlike his brother Chafua, Ajizi is quiet, fearful and isn't really a fighter and would probably be considered weak in terms of fighting. Every time training begins Chafua runs out and starts fighting probably pretty much anything he sees, but Ajizi...well...he just likes to sit in the background and watch rather than participate in the events and getting scars and such.
Goals: Nothing at the moment
History: See Hasira's Bio  but if it is required I'll write one instead.
Ajizi's parents met and Hasira mated with the King of the outlands and mated (Birds and the Bees children). Once created she brought Chafua and Ajizi into the world.
Author Alias: Naji
RP Experience: 2 years
How You Found Us: Acacia Pride
RP Sample: Must this really be done again? XD
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Ajizi
Jul 16, 2011 17:20:24 GMT -5
Post by naji on Jul 16, 2011 17:20:24 GMT -5
Update:Mboga's pic added
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Ajizi
Jul 16, 2011 17:29:42 GMT -5
Post by Cherry on Jul 16, 2011 17:29:42 GMT -5
Naji, the full description is too short... use more adjectives! I find it helpful to describe even the tiniest details. On cubs, I do a paragraph of their cub description and then a paragraph of their adult description. Same goes for the personality. It's too short! Describe him in situations, whether as an adult or cub. It's helpful to do both. For the history you are supposed to tell how the mom and dad got together.... As for the roleplay sample.... It's only required for the first bio. You could do it again for fun though!
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Ajizi
Jul 16, 2011 18:01:59 GMT -5
Post by naji on Jul 16, 2011 18:01:59 GMT -5
Ok Cherry! I'll revamp it lol |
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Ajizi
Jul 16, 2011 18:14:44 GMT -5
Post by Cherry on Jul 16, 2011 18:14:44 GMT -5
all right. Accepted!
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but if it is required I'll write one instead.
