Naji

[naji]

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NAJI
YOUR CHARACTER'S PICTURE

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The Basics
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Name - Naji

Gender - Male

Age - Infant

Species - Lion

Homeland - Oldlands

Rank - N/A

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Quick description - Naji is a tawny little cub with a pitch black small head of hair.

Full description - As a cub, Naji will end up looking a little scrawny, his small tuft of hair sometimes a tad messy. But as he grows into a full-fledged lion, he'll have a muscular build and a luxurious velvet black mane.

Personality - Naji is a curious, yet stubborn little guy that tends to get into trouble with his antics. He tends to be somewhat cocky and boastful towards others his age and on occasion towards his elders.

History - Naji was born in the middle of the Savannah and abandoned by his mother, for she did not want him. (Sad right?) So as of right now he has yet to be found and be raised by somebody. Naji's mother had an affair with a rogue lion when she was young and naive feeling inadequate to raise a cub at her age which ended up resulting in her not wanting her young son.

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What About Yourself
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Who are you - -waves- Hello all! I'm learning to just paragraph RP and am trying to work hard on adding more detail to posts and such. I'm a friendly person, so dont be afraid to talk to me, I don't bite

How you found us- The Acacia Pride

Roleplay example - Naji laid there in the lengthy grass in the dirt on the Savannah, mewing quite loudly for his mother, who had abandoned him, leaving the unwanted cub to defend for himself. A drop of rain landed on the infant's nose causing the little cub to scrunch up his small nose in slight irritation at the sensation of the water.

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[AdminAccount]

Hi, and welcome to the Dawning of a New Era!

There are a couple of problems with your application that need to be fixed before we can accept your character's profile.

First would be the fact that Pridelanders are currently banned. However, there are several other 'pridelands', and the Oldlands even have two lionesses with young cubs who could foster/adopt Naji, if you ask their roleplayers (Miyuki for Eupe, Stephanie for Nima).

You're missing your full description, which is similar to the quick description, except it goes into far more detail.

The personality is a little shorter than it should be. Perhaps you could explain how Naji acts towards others?

His history is also a little shorter than it needs to be. Perhaps you could go into more detail about the circumstances of Naji's birth, like why his mother didn't want him, and how he came to live with the pride he lives with.

Sorry if this looks like a lot of edits.

[naji]

It's ok lol

I'll try my best to sort it out and make it better

[AdminAccount]

Due to your character being a newborn, I'll approve your app, despite the fact that your descriptions are still a little shorter than is the standard.

Just remember that if you make any more characters, they'll have to meet the word counts outlined in the thread where the bio form is found, regardless of their ages.

Approved.